Hi Wyatt. Tyler here from LH6 from Gis int i like the story line. I think that you could add more slides and a bit more words. But other than that it made me think of when I went to a circus with my family. it's a really good idea. and if you want to visit my blog you can go to https://gisinttylerr.blogspot.com/
Kia Ora, this is Skye from LH6, Gisborne Intermediate School i really enjoyed reading your story line. i think you can improve on making this a bit longer, but overall i enjoyed this story line, if you would like to check out my learning go visit https://gisintskyes.blogspot.com/
Hi Wyatt. Tyler here from LH6 from Gis int i like the story line. I think that you could add more slides and a bit more words. But other than that it made me think of when I went to a circus with my family. it's a really good idea. and if you want to visit my blog you can go to https://gisinttylerr.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, this is Skye from LH6, Gisborne Intermediate School i really enjoyed reading your story line. i think you can improve on making this a bit longer, but overall i enjoyed this story line, if you would like to check out my learning go visit https://gisintskyes.blogspot.com/
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